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By Dr. Ivan Edwards

Koru storms in,
like a lion…
entering a savannah plain
he already owns.
He steals the air.
Big, strong.
Overbearing.
His eyes sweep the room.
He doesn’t greet Daniel.
Menacing.
He doesn’t greet Amara.
Angry.
He waves a finger
at Daniel Asaba
without uttering a word,
as if he were vermin.
Amara stiffens.
She doesn’t like
what she sees.
Daniel rises,
fists clenched.
He won’t just
sit back
and watch
a menacing big bully
push him around.
“I am Daniel Asaba,” he says,
angrily, with some pride
attempting to surface,
“son of Derrick and Monica Asaba—”
“Shut up,” barks Koru,
interrupting with contempt.
Nostrils flaring.
Like a lion denied its mate,
Koru steps forward,
towering.
“You speak only after
I give you permission,”
he speaks,
wealth and privilege
seasoned in a posture
that demands obedience.
He looks Daniel up and down
with contempt so fierce
it could curdle goat milk.
“You are nothing,”
he says.
“But a pitiful dreamer
who has entered territory
unreserved for him.”
Daniel’s jaw tightens.
His fists clench harder.
But he does not step back.
Koru smirks.
Daring.
He enjoys this,
watching lesser men
try to stand tall
with him.
Amara suddenly gets up
and steps between them.
Enough.
“Stop.”
Koru freezes.
He has never heard “stop” said to him.
Not even by his parents.
His eyes widen,
just a little.
Enough to show
Amara has startled him.
Amara steals the moment,
glaring at him.
“I am not your property.
I am not something you wave at
or command.”
The lantern trembles
and dances.
The air heats up
with tension.

Daniel is breathing hard.
Koru’s nostrils flare more.
The lion is appalled.
Silence arrives.
It lingers,
begging to stay.
Then a phone rings,
breaking the brief spell.
It is Daniel’s mother calling.
A motherly instinct has nudged
her heart.
She senses danger.
Daniel answers the incoming call.
His voice tries too hard
to keep his fear masked.
“Mother?”
Her worried
voice spills out.
“Daniel… come home,” she says.
“I feel something.
I feel danger.
Come home now.”
His face changes.
Fear.
Obedience.
He looks at Amara.
Their eyes talk.
The lion remains subdued.
Daniel darts out,
past Amara,
and past the frozen lion.
His footsteps sound
frantic and loud as he exits…
with the sound of his steps
dying out in seconds.
He is eaten up
by the night.
Silence lingers.
Amara unfreezes.
She dashes past a motionless Koru
and runs out into the night,
overwhelmed.
The lion is alone.
Breathing hard,
humiliated.
He digs out his cell phone
and calls Amara.
No answer.
He calls again.
No answer.
Then he
calls his mother.
Feeling unsure,
the lion needs
the great lioness.
She answers immediately.
“Yes, Koru, may I help you?” she asks,
calmly,
in a tone accustomed to power.
He explains everything:
Daniel,
the disrespect,
the confrontation,
Daniel and Amara leaving…
Silence returns.
Then she speaks.
“The royal gathering is coming,”
she says.
“You must look strong.
You must be in control.”
Koru breathes out slowly.
“And Amara?” he asks.
“She is running around
with that Asaba fellow… a nobody.”
Another round of silence.
Longer.
Heavier.
Then her voice returns,
soft,
dangerous.
“Do not worry,” she says.
“The men in the black car
will solve the problem
soon…
very soon.”
Koru closes his eyes.
Listens.
Accepts.
The night continues
its restless hum.
Daniel hurries home,
fear propelling his footsteps.
Amara runs to a friend’s apartment,
in Bugolobi,
the darkness swallowing her up.
Broken.
Love and tradition
wrestling for her.
Either the man she loves
or the man her clan demands
will take her hand.
Meanwhile… the night continues
to watch the city’s villains.
Even…
the black car,
with men in it,
starting its engine.

To be continued…
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It’s fabulous and develops curiosity
Thanks for sharing those kind words.
Keep reading. There is more to come.